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[Tex] Bionic Head Texture
That is the head, can i get CC please, and also a price range for it. thanks.
To be honest mate, I really don't like it. The robot parts of the face is really bland, without detail and not shaded enough in my opinion. The human half just looks very unrealistic, unless you're going for a simple/fake look, then you have my respect for it. If this is a wip, or a starting reference to what you will be aiming towards, then that is a pretty good job.
Other things you really need to work on is the eye, robot mouth/hole thing, nose and eyebrows. Also the sides of the head is a bit to empty to me. Starting off, the human eye, is done pretty messily, It looks as if you have done it with a pencil with an unsteady hand. The robot mouth is really lacking detail in my eyes, and maybe needed to be attended to. The nose seems to be ok, but the shadow you have given to it, looks as if it is smudged, removing my appeal for it. Lastly, the eyebrows. To me, they look nothing like hair, just a few black lines next to each other. Oh, one other thing is, the metal or substance which is the robot half, isn't very appealing. It looks slightly hairy, if you can understand what I mean. To conclude my criticism, the sides of the head, the robot parts wrapping around the head look really roughly done, the shade on them is also smudged, and the line in the middle of them looks really out of place and simple. Although there is a lot to work at, it's an alright head texture.
Try not to take all of this to harshly, cause it is alright. But I could not put a price tag onto it. I would probably rate this a 3/10. Just work on your mistakes and I'm sure you'll come to be a great texture maker.
Other things you really need to work on is the eye, robot mouth/hole thing, nose and eyebrows. Also the sides of the head is a bit to empty to me. Starting off, the human eye, is done pretty messily, It looks as if you have done it with a pencil with an unsteady hand. The robot mouth is really lacking detail in my eyes, and maybe needed to be attended to. The nose seems to be ok, but the shadow you have given to it, looks as if it is smudged, removing my appeal for it. Lastly, the eyebrows. To me, they look nothing like hair, just a few black lines next to each other. Oh, one other thing is, the metal or substance which is the robot half, isn't very appealing. It looks slightly hairy, if you can understand what I mean. To conclude my criticism, the sides of the head, the robot parts wrapping around the head look really roughly done, the shade on them is also smudged, and the line in the middle of them looks really out of place and simple. Although there is a lot to work at, it's an alright head texture.
Try not to take all of this to harshly, cause it is alright. But I could not put a price tag onto it. I would probably rate this a 3/10. Just work on your mistakes and I'm sure you'll come to be a great texture maker.
Last edited by Oimanoi; Apr 21, 2011 at 10:21 AM.
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i think you should before you post a head make a wip so that we can help with tipps ....because the lines are bad drawen no good shade effekts and the nose is wrong 2/10 if you want some texture tipps pm me but i will be 4 days inactive good luck with your next heads
A head needs TIME
A head needs TIME
Originally Posted by Oimanoi
To be honest mate, I really don't like it. The robot parts of the face is really bland, without detail and not shaded enough in my opinion. The human half just looks very unrealistic, unless you're going for a simple/fake look, then you have my respect for it. If this is a wip, or a starting reference to what you will be aiming towards, then that is a pretty good job.
Other things you really need to work on is the eye, robot mouth/hole thing, nose and eyebrows. Also the sides of the head is a bit to empty to me. Starting off, the human eye, is done pretty messily, It looks as if you have done it with a pencil with an unsteady hand. The robot mouth is really lacking detail in my eyes, and maybe needed to be attended to. The nose seems to be ok, but the shadow you have given to it, looks as if it is smudged, removing my appeal for it. Lastly, the eyebrows. To me, they look nothing like hair, just a few black lines next to each other. Oh, one other thing is, the metal or substance which is the robot half, isn't very appealing. It looks slightly hairy, if you can understand what I mean. To conclude my criticism, the sides of the head, the robot parts wrapping around the head look really roughly done, the shade on them is also smudged, and the line in the middle of them looks really out of place and simple. Although there is a lot to work at, it's an alright head texture.
Try not to take all of this to harshly, cause it is alright. But I could not put a price tag onto it. I would probably rate this a 3/10. Just work on your mistakes and I'm sure you'll come to be a great texture maker.
Originally Posted by KOTBOLT
i think you should before you post a head make a wip so that we can help with tipps ....because the lines are bad drawen no good shade effekts and the nose is wrong 2/10 if you want some texture tipps pm me but i will be 4 days inactive good luck with your next heads
A head needs TIME
Well it still is a wip thats why i havnt tryed to sell it or anything. I'm still a noobie artist and this is a new type a head im trying, with more skin to detail and metal which i havnt tried before. As for the shaky line i admit i cant draw with a mouse to save my life xD. So some tips would be greatly apprecaited as to what i can do on GIMP to help make this look more realistic/neater/whatever it has to be
Ah, so it is a wip. Well then, it is pretty good for starting off. For tips I wouldn't know exactly, as I use Photoshop and am not really fluent with gimp. Probably just look up some tutorials for it mate. That's what I usually do. Maybe I recommend a tablet or something? As you say you're not that good with a mouse, are you good with hand? I don't know what your circumstances are with money and such, but I find tablets pretty cool to use.
Life is like Basketball. Aim, Concentrate, Balance and Following through. That's all you ever need to accomplish your goals.
