Wolf257: I don't know who you are, but I can tell you that weed has no idea what she (or he, probably not) is talking about. She said grab less, but you had one moment where you grabbed for one set of turn frames. Grabbing less is not grabbing at all, so that was wrong and horribly opinionative criticism. Also he says more flow? Your quite relaxed if I could say so. You can't make a madman where the player dismembers many uke parts if you have 'flow' like he is thinking. If you had a madman with flow like in his thoughts, you would be making a tornado movement, where you moved in one clockwise or counterclockwise direction the whole game unless you SLOWLY moved the opposite way at a period of time. Last, "the opener is weird is the suckiest point a critique can give". Critiquing something is explaining what is right or wrong with it. I say it was quite impressive.
Same with your 2nd replay.
9/10 nice job.