Its good , But lacks of design and effects , with background will look cooler , maybe also add different text font.
For me looks simple , that is cnc i think , also maybe using shaders will make it look better
It's a screnshot with text.
Not even that hard to do.
Honestly, atleast use some renders.
Take my avatar for example.
It's super simple. Yet it still has a dark and eire look to it.
well , is ok , but paint isnt a good program for editing pictures , try to get photoshop , blender , flash , gimp , or any other . there are many free programs u can use