Toribash
Original Post
Clan Story Competition
Ok,so im too lazy to make a clan story(i might try) So,im hosting a competition to make the best clan story there shall be item prizes,the comprtition ends on my birthday,though if all entries are in. So post the stories here when your done.
Sorry to be annoying, but i have just a few more questions (i think)

How long do you want it to be roughly?
And anything specific you want us to put in there?
The length doesnt matter, not too short though, fairly big.
Basically we want a cool story, with creature like demons and ghosts. And add lots to do with the creature phantom.
Clan Sigma Council
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Aye, i am quite the thinker. if you want me to plot out a big story plan for you i can do it like nothing. i actually wrote a short book for my class and got an A+ so if mister wants to do art on it he can.
Lol,yeah mister's insane dont ask him to do art for you,u gotta carefully leave a note outside the bathroom in the morning,thats the only time hes in a good mood (he sleeps for 2 hours in the shower)
there was a time, a time of ghouls and ghosts... in the haunted mansion filled with hundreds of wandering souls. They lie in wait for anything to come inside , where light never shines and darkness prevails. The phantoms lure the street walking couple into the house by whispering to them "help me... help me.. help me...." Irresistable to the pair, they enter the house, unaware that this last decision of theirs is the last. The Phantoms spring out slicing up the prey..... and enslaving thier souls as to be one of their own, the screaming bodys lie there, hoping for a quicker death and wished they never been fooled by the satanic Phantoms....


thats my story, is it good?
Last edited by Frost-Dragon; Jul 14, 2008 at 01:50 AM.
[10:19] <~Tim> Why the fuck not, I'm insane :D
[12:06] <~Tim> Frost-Dragon: I bet you're sexy
Thats pretty good, but (personally) i think you should do some formatting, and editing maybe.

Right now its one MASSIVE sentence

And paragraphs would be nice, thats just me

Im working on mine, so good work
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