Toribash
THIS STORY IS TOTALLY FICTIONAL (duh) AND HAS NO RELEVANCE TO ANYTHING INGAME OR OTHERWISE (again, duh)

Long ago, in the world of Toribash, there was chaos. A great creature terrorized the land and many stepped up to battle this fearsome creature, yet none had succeeded. Many stories had been told about this monster yet none knew he was actually in an ethereal state. Then one man stepped out of the shroud of terror this beast had created. His name was ofPhailure.

Phailure battled fearsomely against the beast in a 1000-frame epic battle. BAM - Superkick here! KA-POW - Dismemberment there!

And finally, the battle was over.
When the dust had settled it was clear Phailure had won
But the battle had taken its toll on the man, and he had suffered mortal wounds

He drew a long breath and said with much difficulty "You... phail.. (BI***EZ ZOMG U R A NUB! LEARN 2 PLAY! LULZ!!1!ELEVEN))" and with those final words he passed.

Yet a strange thing happened, Phailure did not move onto the afterlife, he lingered on in this world, chained here through his sheer will. He felt he still had a place in this world, and a job to do (that job being regulating on nubz!).

And so he started a clan, the rest of those unfortunate souls who were slayed by the beast were drawn to Phailure and his clan. And so they joined, one after another...

This clan was of course named the Phantoms - and the rest is as they say... history...

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Uhhmm, i just cooked that up in my mind, coz i was throwing around story ideas for a while so umm... any feedback would be great

If theres something wrong with it, or if you guys dont like something
or its too long etc etc... i can make a new story

(just again, none of this ever happened, its totally fictional!)

(I mean, cmon, Toribashians dont die! duh)

EDIT: thinking back, this is a really crap story
Im gonna TRY and think up another, but still, tell me what you guys think

Ive got my box of Kleenex right here!
Last edited by YoungBl00d; Jul 15, 2008 at 06:33 PM.
Co Leader of Hell-Razor
[RAWR]Cindermomo: YOUNG BLOOD IS A STUD MUFFIN
My brother thinks that just because I'm writing a 100 issue long comic, that I can't enter this competition. I am sad now.
And I DO sleep in the shower. Sitting up. But only for ONE hour, Steve. And it's not that I'm in a bad mood continuously, I'm just tired a lot of the time.

Which MAY or may NOT put me in a bad mood.
I'd like to see Hulk get so pissed that he exits his physical body.
Instead of being powered by psychic energy or whatever, he's powered by ARRRGH FUCK YOU
There was once a great warrior named ofphailure who was called upon to defeat such a beast with so much power, and rage in him. As the beast rested after raging a town, phailure ceased him jabbing a sword on his back, the beast roared and swing at him. they faught for many days. hit after hit, phailure still stood. He jumped of the wall landing on the beasts back, phailure took the sword and stabbed him again all the from his back so his sword.With the last few seconds that the beast had, he grabbed of phailure and threw him towards the floor. With quick reactions he stopped him self buy holding on to the beast.The beast fell on him. when the villagers no longer heard any roars or screams of rage the went to look at them.Multiple men pushed the beast of of phailure, and with phailures last breath he said, let my story live forever, his sword shined, everyone stared at the magnificent sword and when they looked back down, ofphailure was gone, never to be seen again, no one knew why he disappeared but from then on, they have called him THE PHANTOM.
Rampaging isnt the only thing im good at ;)
>>6th dan<<
Fine fine, ill think up another entry... the prize better be good!
Co Leader of Hell-Razor
[RAWR]Cindermomo: YOUNG BLOOD IS A STUD MUFFIN
urgh>.<, I am not ganna write another story.thats the only I dea I had.>.<
Rampaging isnt the only thing im good at ;)
>>6th dan<<
Once upon a time in a galaxy far, far away, some kid decided to gather a group of people together. Then the kid called them the phantoms.
The end

Originally Posted by YoungBl00d View Post
THIS STORY IS TOTALLY FICTIONAL (duh) AND HAS NO RELEVANCE TO ANYTHING INGAME OR OTHERWISE (again, duh)

Long ago, in the world of Toribash, there was chaos. A great creature terrorized the land and many stepped up to battle this fearsome creature, yet none had succeeded. Many stories had been told about this monster yet none knew he was actually in an ethereal state. Then one man stepped out of the shroud of terror this beast had created. His name was ofPhailure.

Phailure battled fearsomely against the beast in a 1000-frame epic battle. BAM - Superkick here! KA-POW - Dismemberment there!

And finally, the battle was over.
When the dust had settled it was clear Phailure had won
But the battle had taken its toll on the man, and he had suffered mortal wounds

He drew a long breath and said with much difficulty "You... phail.. (BI***EZ ZOMG U R A NUB! LEARN 2 PLAY! LULZ!!1!ELEVEN))" and with those final words he passed.

Yet a strange thing happened, Phailure did not move onto the afterlife, he lingered on in this world, chained here through his sheer will. He felt he still had a place in this world, and a job to do (that job being regulating on nubz!).

And so he started a clan, the rest of those unfortunate souls who were slayed by the beast were drawn to Phailure and his clan. And so they joined, one after another...

This clan was of course named the Phantoms - and the rest is as they say... history...

------------------------------------------------------------

Uhhmm, i just cooked that up in my mind, coz i was throwing around story ideas for a while so umm... any feedback would be great

If theres something wrong with it, or if you guys dont like something
or its too long etc etc... i can make a new story

(just again, none of this ever happened, its totally fictional!)

(I mean, cmon, Toribashians dont die! duh)

EDIT: thinking back, this is a really crap story
Im gonna TRY and think up another, but still, tell me what you guys think

Ive got my box of Kleenex right here!

The bracket part always makes me shit myself laughing.
I'd like to see Hulk get so pissed that he exits his physical body.
Instead of being powered by psychic energy or whatever, he's powered by ARRRGH FUCK YOU