That replay was really nice imo
In the opener, you moved a little too fast making it seems a little awkward. But it was nice
Boom was really nice, but I believe you can do more c;
Head juggling and the skeet was ok to me.
9/10

Loved the opener, could not have been better.
The mini manip was great, but the spin was just astonishing. Seriously, that's some A+ speed. It would have been perfect if you didn't grab.
The 4 dm boomhit was great, but the head juggling was a bit stiff.
The skeet was short range, nothing special.
The pose was a bit stiff, but it was a nice standing pose.

8.6/10 It was just supreme until the head juggling.

First decent self-spar with a beautiful decap twist.

The opening kicks were damn nice but uke's setup looked a little... odd.
The punches after the opening was pretty good, but the exchange of hits in frame 550 to 480 was not really a sight to look at.
The decap was well executed though, no criticism on that part.


I'd say the replay is very good for your first decent self-spar with a decap


Ok the last part sounds a little too specific, but it's still a great replay in my taste.

Finally did a decent breakdancing replay! Improving bit by bit.

Also a madman that's finally finished.

The booms in the madman was good, but the only I didn't like about it is the way you used the same leg for kicking twice. Don't get me wrong those booms were great, I love the spin you did before hitting him and the four dm boom was pretty well done. I guess I didn't like the use of the leg twice because it broke the flow a little.

Why do you have the self damage on though?


I don't know about the tricking. I can't cnc on trickings well.

It helps my booms a little bit, that's all. I wouldn't of been able to get the booms like that without it. My theory may be incorrect, but if I hit the joints hard enough, they'll impact other joints with about the same amount of momentum used in the attack, DM'ing the joints. If more joints collide and break, the boom is bigger.

Also, thanks for the CnC.

Memorial: Booms were very good, I liked how you got a boom without penetrating Uke on the first one. The second one was even better, you managed to penetrate.
One flaw is that you used the same leg to kick, like spry said.
You managed to get lots of momentum, but I didn't like when you stopped before the second boom.

Still a great replay.
8/10

Thanks guys. Working on a manip right now. Look forward to the first version of it. I'll edit this post later or, if someone posts here again, I'll just upload it.

You guys have really helpful. I appreciate that.

Memorial
Opener was ok, the spin before you boom was pretty unique and I like it :o
First boom was really nice, second boom was nice.
Pose was great.
9/10