Nice review. Your grammar is still sloppy sometimes, and the structure and order of your sentences could be better, but I think it was enjoyable and your love of the game came right through. I enjoyed reading it, and I hope you'll keep practicing this way (by writing reviews) because this is going to improve your skill in English a great deal. So all in all, good job. =]
As for that 1-minute loading time thing, that's when the game caches stuff into your machine's RAM (assuming you are palying from a disc). Nothing to worry about.