Cnc. yiss.
Opener was cool and unique. The first 10 frames felt like nothing new but the way you turn it into that wide stand is epic. That left shoulder at 750 is something I guess people would complain on but personally I don't mind. Replay continues all fancy until that insane kick which you should get a half-polished medal for. The way you stop the rotation for a moment then directly accelerate into a new one is epic. It adds much to the stylish part of the replay. Good work with getting uke into a position you can work with by tapping him with your hand. However at 600 your arms seem to get a bit twitchy and as cro mentioned the grab was meh. (You can edit that out in notepad without consequences though ;p) Beautifull follow up boom on that. Spin after was ok but I like how you transferred into the pose from that. For the post I think relaxing elbows a bit more and getting a more "finished" pose like you just ended the fight.
Overall the replay was great and the fact that you got single dm's with boomforce makes it look fantastic.
There also appears like you swallowed someone. +5 points to gryffindor.
Opener was cool and unique. The first 10 frames felt like nothing new but the way you turn it into that wide stand is epic. That left shoulder at 750 is something I guess people would complain on but personally I don't mind. Replay continues all fancy until that insane kick which you should get a half-polished medal for. The way you stop the rotation for a moment then directly accelerate into a new one is epic. It adds much to the stylish part of the replay. Good work with getting uke into a position you can work with by tapping him with your hand. However at 600 your arms seem to get a bit twitchy and as cro mentioned the grab was meh. (You can edit that out in notepad without consequences though ;p) Beautifull follow up boom on that. Spin after was ok but I like how you transferred into the pose from that. For the post I think relaxing elbows a bit more and getting a more "finished" pose like you just ended the fight.
Overall the replay was great and the fact that you got single dm's with boomforce makes it look fantastic.
There also appears like you swallowed someone. +5 points to gryffindor.
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I don't exactly have time to do an in-depth CnC right now, but that was a pretty nice replay. I enjoyed watching it, couple things could be fixed. Like the pose.
I will say I'll edit CnC into this, but probably won't since I'm a lazy bum.
In the meantime, look at this tricking shit.
I will say I'll edit CnC into this, but probably won't since I'm a lazy bum.
In the meantime, look at this tricking shit.
Thank you! The last kick was so unbalanced because I was trying to get a triple kick without touching the ground at all, but I got impatient and started getting a little sloppy. I started bending back too far and didn't really understand how to fix it, while still getting the dms. The right hand grab was probably because I started editing a few frames too late. I didn't plan on grabbing with my left hand, and I didn't know that grabbing early was illegal ;o
I'll make sure not to do that.
What's wrong with my shoulder @750? My arms @600 are realllll stiff so I could reach uke. Like I said I was bending back too far and couldn't fix it lol.
Dscigs:
I liked this, and tricking isn't something I'd usually like to watch. The transition @625 ish from the normal jumping around to the breakdancing was A+, looked real smooth. Not sure how I felt about that headspin though, you shouldn't move your neck to give you balance, that's what you use your hands for when you add extra spin. Rinse, repeat until you get enough momentum to lower your shoulders and get a long, nice spin. Pose was nice, but the step before it felt weird to watch. Imo the pose should've came a lot faster.
I'll make sure not to do that.
What's wrong with my shoulder @750? My arms @600 are realllll stiff so I could reach uke. Like I said I was bending back too far and couldn't fix it lol.
telling me how to fix the grab would be awesome
Dscigs:
I liked this, and tricking isn't something I'd usually like to watch. The transition @625 ish from the normal jumping around to the breakdancing was A+, looked real smooth. Not sure how I felt about that headspin though, you shouldn't move your neck to give you balance, that's what you use your hands for when you add extra spin. Rinse, repeat until you get enough momentum to lower your shoulders and get a long, nice spin. Pose was nice, but the step before it felt weird to watch. Imo the pose should've came a lot faster.
Last edited by TyZi; Jun 3, 2013 at 11:22 AM.
Originally Posted by Kaneki333
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Originally Posted by Tyzi
The right hand grab was probably because I started editing a few frames too late. I didn't plan on grabbing with my left hand, and I didn't know that grabbing early was illegal ;o
I'll make sure not to do that.
What's wrong with my shoulder @750? My arms @600 are realllll stiff so I could reach uke. Like I said I was bending back too far and couldn't fix it lol.
It stopped in a kinda stiff position but with some sleep done I can see that it actually fills a purpose. My fault.
Originally Posted by Tyzi
telling me how to fix the grab would be awesome
Oh yeah that might help xD
1. Open in notepad.
2. Ctrl + F to search.
3. Type in "grab" or grip"
4. Remove that whole sentence you find.
5. Save
6. ????
7. Profit
To boldly go where no man has gone before
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Originally Posted by Dscigs
I don't exactly have time to do an in-depth CnC right now, but that was a pretty nice replay. I enjoyed watching it, couple things could be fixed. Like the pose.
I will say I'll edit CnC into this, but probably won't since I'm a lazy bum.
In the meantime, look at this tricking shit.
When adjusting your head spins, use only one frame at a time and make sure to slow down unnecessary twitches. It'll make it a lot better :) Otherwise nice replay.
Last edited by Hattersin; Jun 4, 2013 at 06:40 AM.
Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
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