Ok, you're good, people say you are good. And I'm going to be as nitpicky as possible here.
At 2889 uke holds this pose while spinning around and pivoting. Sometimes holding still works in situations but not this time, try relaxing a bit more and not have it look as if two robots are fighting.
At 2605 tori spins around on his toes painfully slow. Problem is no one ever does that in real life it looks completely unnatural with him standing up on the tips of his toes. And then you hold the pose again but again it just doesn't work.
At 2498 tori goes from his left knee bent to it just shooting outwards. I get that martial arts is sudden, and trust me I know is I have done them my whole life, but when you do that it doesn't look like a fast move it just looks like jerky, twitchy, shit.
Finally, at the ending pose his left arm comes up and locks into place. There are lots of other times it does this, but I'll pick this part since it's at the end. Why do you keep doing that? It doesn't look nice or natural, you have to at least slow it down first and make it look like your arm has momentum. Nobody can entirely freeze their arm, they can stop it fast but never immediately freeze it, try to relax a bit before so it looks like your arm has some mass, Toribash's physics are weird like that.
All the rest was fantastic.