from 0:05-0:08 it looked awfully stiff and unnatural
not only that but i'm sure that you used that mirror thing once more and kinda killed it's vibe pquick
other than that the whole atmosphere of it is lovely and the cines or whatever are sexy yo
true improvement from first wip
but revamp the first 12 seconds thanks
The flow is noticeably better this time around, nice improvement.
thank you!
Originally Posted by hobo
i don't know terminology -
from 0:05-0:08 it looked awfully stiff and unnatural
not only that but i'm sure that you used that mirror thing once more and kinda killed it's vibe pquick
other than that the whole atmosphere of it is lovely and the cines or whatever are sexy yo
true improvement from first wip
but revamp the first 12 seconds thanks
yeah, i was thinking of the same, but ave to find a a good clip for it.
thanks hobo!
Originally Posted by Complexity
pancrop felt kinda stiff and the cine velo was kinda weird but other than that its okay
yeah, i dont know, the pancrop might be with the cines
thanks plex!
Originally Posted by Zorow
fill the black screen with an intro. Logo, orgs... Ect.
it's on it's way, dont worry.
going to app to archillery. thanks for the worrying people!
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Last edited by strikas; Sep 9, 2014 at 01:53 PM.
Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
