the only thing that bothered me a lot was the camera, notice how every time the camera moves in a different direction it looks very sudden? try to make it more smooth when working with slow clips like this. but pretty nice for a first video, make more
I think using expertcam will really help with the camera work : http://forum.toribash.com/showpost.p...&postcount=110
It's a little complicated at first, but it's worth the effort, it will make your camera movements much smoother