in a way I sort of like the weird unique sound it has, it's just strange and weird. If you're going for Melbourne bounce though like will sparks the kick needs to be more prominent and punchier. In some places the uplifter was too loud for the rest of the track, so I'd recommend just turning the volume on those down. I think you put too much side chain for the kick that you had, which for that much side chain needs to be punchier.

A good start though, I look forward to seeing more stuff from you