Toribash
Originally Posted by Velair View Post



went for a simplistic clean style

thats fine, it looks good.
Try fixing the right side for the hair? it leans to the right
make it straight if you can m8
Last edited by Bulous; Aug 13, 2015 at 12:06 AM. Reason: EDIT
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i'm working on another version of the mouth incase you don't like that one.

i'm not good at like teethy grins so can i just make it a big smile?
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Originally Posted by Velair View Post

i'm working on another version of the mouth incase you don't like that one.

i'm not good at like teethy grins so can i just make it a big smile?

thats fine, as long as it has a smile like this then its okay


Show me an ingame or a 3d version to see how it looks
Last edited by Bulous; Aug 13, 2015 at 10:51 PM. Reason: EDIT
It's Fabulous
Originally Posted by Bulous View Post
thats fine, as long as it has a smile like this then its okay


Show me an ingame or a 3d version to see how it looks

me being stupid i didn't save the mouth so i had to redraw it.



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Originally Posted by Velair View Post
me being stupid i didn't save the mouth so i had to redraw it.



Thats fine its still good.
can you bring the mouth up higher? seems a little low

also try adding small bags under the eyes along with a little curved line under the mouth
Last edited by Bulous; Aug 14, 2015 at 01:46 AM. Reason: EDIT
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