Toribash
indifference
i'm not going to lie, i didn't really like the use of your movement.
the opener was something I have seen before...
However, I think it's really different of you too multiple spins off the floor one after another without making it look gross.
The two kicks on uke after that and the launch could of been a nice start-up for a manipulation, however you just kicked and bounced away.
I see that you got back to him with style, but maybe you could of avoided coming into contact with uke until you actually meant to move him at frame 448.
Not sure why you went all that effort to create upward momentum for uke at 448, but then stop it at 411.. It looks eh.
After that, I liked how you balance on one hand and pushed him further out, which lead you into a nice launch.
I liked how you spun around after the launch, but i think you could of got more dm's than 1, after all of that effort (not saying that dm was bad).
Perfect transition into a standing pose.

now, I know that you're an alt, but you didn't transfer any of your stuff over, and i want decent replay makers and decent people to look decent. Since i'm quitting toribash, I decided to give you a small gift.
goodluck with replay making and this community lmao.
father of philip scone
thanks for the cnc
i see what you're saying about how i didn't use my movement nicely.
basically it was a useless replay.
i'll work on that soon, and thanks for the glasses

edit: since you were my first cncer im going to cnc in the style you did (even though your banned dick face)


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Please avoid delete bumping (referring to your previously deleted 2 posts in the same day)
Last edited by pusga; Sep 18, 2015 at 01:11 AM.
Indifference:

I loved the opener it's just I expected more from it.
But I like the idea shows pretty much what you can do and have some solid movements going on there.
Absolutely love the transaction to the pose.

Dude nice.

It's Cindy worth.
Last edited by mused; Sep 18, 2015 at 09:35 AM.
sleepy
consumed:

that was great
i especially love the arm+torso dm and the way you moved uke's upper body after
have to say, decap was disappointing though
thanks for the cnc people
ill try to hit your replay threads up soon if i havent already
im no one shiro

ashamed of the pause at 302 but whatever
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