Tedster man, did you use vegas or the other software for this?
Cause it still lacks effects, screen pumps, sync and color Correction.
The keyframes also need to be closer to the tori, except on the spar.
You also need to alternate the speed inside the replays and possibly use an overlay.

Yes, I know it lacks that stuff, if you check where my thread about the video is, it clearly states that it's a WiP and has no effects on purpose, I will try to add color correction, but everything else I may decide not to add till my next video edit.

Messin around with effects:

Here you go Ted.

Mod for Video replay?

I have added the mod but the replay isnt that good so I have removed it from that post.
Instead, of video.rpl, use this replay (mod is there as well.)

woop woop for doodlin'

Nice doodles duck.
Can you doodle a duck, duck?
Or a duck doodling a duck?

Well, my first drawing, came out much better than I expected to. ;-;

That's a pretty nice style if you ask me