thanks thee i really appreciate it ^^

here's a 10min one

still a bit lazy

looks a bit stiff and i dont like that you stop at around frame 270.
The wrist flick at 245 looks awkward (maybe you could have lowered your arms and contracted your elbows to dodge uke a bit).
the boom is nice

not bad for a 10min replay

opener jump looked a bit strange,and was a bit stiff that move.
boom kick was good,but i saw a asymmetry on that boom,the pec one.
pose was good.