You should try messing with the bangs a little bit maybe change the hair style, also those eyes seem like they're gonna fit the tori weirdly and their shape is a bit odd try making them a little more round. You should also change the nose style it looks sorta weird looking at it dead on like that imo
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The eyes look better, but the nose seems too wide, with the hair try not making the bangs so frizzy if you know what I mean, like make them a bit more straight like you have the sides of the hair
I'd suggest putting the nostrils under the face mask, since they are like half uncovered by the mask, it makes the nose look abnormally wide. I'll definitely follow the progress, if it turns out good i'll PM you about buying it maybe
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