Toribash
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[VID] Forget
Okay so I know this one isn't quite as good as my others, but I guess I will still be accepting Cnc.


Music: Sophie Meiers - wet socks
Replays by: Shikkumo
Edited with: Sony Vegas Pro 13
Last edited by Ozauris; Oct 3, 2016 at 10:48 PM.
Chances are you are looking at one of my videos in the post above anyway, so here is my youtube channel.
I see improvement. And I feel like this is better than your others.

I think you need to work on making your transitions fit more with the edit or theme.

And other stuff that I can't put my finger on
Originally Posted by Surfings View Post
use better replays

this and better keyframing, also the cc is super bland, it looks like you added warmth and a vignette
Last edited by Velair; Oct 5, 2016 at 11:33 PM.
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Well the transitions were really unpleasing maybe try keyframing and when you end the keyframing look off a little and put in a smooth transition also the effects were a bit weak it felt like a shader with some screen pumps. Almost like I was just watching a replay showcase with no commentary on crack.