the opacity thing in 0:08 and split screen in 0:17 looked lazy imo. i felt something else could've been done for that.
i'm sure if you continued the edit for 10 more seconds or started 10 seconds later you could've used a part of the song which wasnt eerie noise.
other than that i thought it was interesting. good use of the glitch and shake

I think it was pretty well done, I think you should continue this edit because you are up to the part with good sync points and you can actually start editing some madmans, spars etc. It's just quite boring if there's no action, you know what I mean? Because so far all you did was cycle between a few replays.

too much going on imo. Hard to look at

I really liked this my man

it was really refreshing to see something different in toribash edits

if you polish this kind of style out, your edits would be insanely atmospheric and captivating

make them longer thank u

0:08 looked out of place since everything was black/white/grey and that was tinted weird

keep it up dude