Toribash
Original Post
HOPE
HELLO!


Here are my replays...
They aren't serious ones, i just like to play around with them.
so basically you don't have to throw simple comments like
"Your style is good" or "It's the classic you!"
give me actual advise please!.
I will be good someday

THANKS!
Last edited by max; Jul 5, 2018 at 12:39 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
Hey those weren't bad at all.
You got a basic idea of a replay.
I like where your replays are going.
In my opinion you just need to polish by doing more or probably by reading the Replay Encyclopedia.

You just need to work on your flow thats all.
I haven't posted in a long time.

These are the same from a long time ago but I think I edited them.

tell me what you think
Attached Files
SWOOP.rpl (236.5 KB, 10 views)
MOVE HOMIE.rpl (203.9 KB, 10 views)
XXXBIRDION.rpl (221.1 KB, 10 views)
Nice replays man.

Move homie was a little slowish but I liked it.
Xxxbirdion start was a bit weird but I really like the split and the parts after.

Keep it up
Former [AS] Co-Leader (Two times), Former [eVo] member, Current [TANG] member <3
God I love this kind of style, so much fun to!

Tell me what I can do after the split please <3
Attached Files
LADs.rpl (88.1 KB, 14 views)
Hey.
I see you got a pretty good play style my dude.
First off is the opener which was pretty generic but thats fine.
Well made transition to pretty sick lift.
But why did you suddenly killed your momentum though? It ruined everything to be honest with you.
Try and get something else from that lift.
7/10 for now.
I've been getting SOOO much better, strict with my movement and on how fluent it should be, once I get that under control I can start working on my boom hits and DMs in general.

I have improved on how to lift UKE up into the air then managing to get interesting moves from it all

Would be amazing if anyone can give me more tips and tricks to reach my boi DesiTwist's level of awesomeness, jokes ;)
THANKS!
Attached Files
LADs.rpl (156.7 KB, 13 views)
The way you leave the ground looks incredibly floppy and pretty out of control.
First punch is also a little weird and the way your neck is relaxed throughout the entire replay triggers me immensely.

Other than that, pretty good.

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