Alright just ignore those on the bottom I did it wrong If a mod can remove those it would be appreciated. You can take them if you like but they are just going to annoy me there.





Those are the first 2 I have made...I am looking for pointers/tips and maybe even rating
You can have these for free if you like, although I doubt anyone will want them as they arent very good at all.

So please, be honest and tell me what you think