This is a picture that i drew first on a drawing pad then transferred to the computer and edited with photoshop cs3, just wondering what people think of my drawing

i already know half of the drawing looks a bit off but the image started as a semi-side perspective drawing which i turned into a face on image so some of the proportions will be slightly off.

[Updated]

I updated a couple of the features of the skin to make it look a bit more cartoonish