okay here we go.

So first off on the positive side, the way your arms were smoothly thrown up and then back down at the very begging jump was rather cool looking. on the negative side...
well first off hard to decide but the way you stopped after the flip killed momentum and flow but then again added the swagger like "hell yeah i landed that bitches". Nextly, jump after that was 1. wayyyy to much hold basically all hold, and then you didn't get the boom hit instead you just got a 2 Dm when you could've gotten more. After that, when you kicked his torso off it was to messy just you hitting him with your ankle and only broke his arm off. next you basically just contracted extented your leg the whole time breaking stuff off. Lastly, you had a bunch of hits that didn't do any Dm'ing therefore making it look sloppy. even more lastly, you didn't break the legs apart, you just hit them with no dm. I know this was harsh but noobies gotta learn

EDIT: @ rellik: is that at me? i never contracted both pecs, never spent a lot of time in air, im not new i've been playing since 08 (on diff account) so im not really sure if what you said has anything to do with my replay >_>