Those replays are pretty grabby and messy. You could use some less grab and more flow. To avoid getting messy and such you should try to keep some distance. Don't squeeze the living hell out of Uke by hugging him, try kicking or punching him and keep the rest of your body out of it. That might work and get you less messy and hopefully stronger hits with lots of power and that power makes for great boomhits.

At the moment you don't seem to be ready for ORMO just yet.

I'm not really a recruiter though. Just my two cents.