Written In the Stars by Tinie Tempah

I edited myself and the editing i've done here really only gets to the first or second chorus but i think i've done a decent job, let me know what you think
and constructive critisism is well appreciated.
ALSO:
Feel free to request songs you'd like me to edit, i did this one in a matter of minutes and I'd like to get some ideas to work on over the next couple of weeks. Thanks

Radi0Edit - Written In The Stars