Anywho, eyes look a bit dark in the latest progress although I would assume you've already dealt with that.

The red lips on the previous version looked to be giving the piece a bit more style and I think you should definitely stick with them. Also the brassiere I tested it and it didn't map too well.

As for the new idea sketch, he should be a tan color I think. Like not jersey shore douchebag tan but like tan tan, it used to be a color I'm told.