Doru:

Truth be told, the opener was a little bit mediocre I'm afraid.

It looked like you were going to do a nice kick-off, but decided not to and contracted and pushed off with your arm. This made it look rather unpleasent and your flow was diminished.

kick was cool, but the key to a great kick is great aim. A little bit higher and with a little more power I could see you turning it into a pretty boom.

Zeto pretty much covered everything after that. I want to see you get much better as well. I know you said that this was a "bumper" replay, but you have to try and put your all into everything that you do. It will get you to your goals faster and you'll learn some great things on the way there.

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Solar Plexus:

Like Dcigs said, the run was rather stiff. You should try and relax more of your joints lke the elbows, ankles, abs, lumbar among other things to try and make the run look as natural as you can.

I feel like you lowered your arm for too long, because you didn't have enough time to spring back at uke and deliver a devastating kick. It was also rather messy to :s

If I were you I would kick earlier and possibly try and contract the hip and fiddle with the other body parts such as the other arm to try and get a good angle on the hit. From there the boom should be easy pickings and a 3 piece boom should be no problem.

You also need to work on your posing skills, a little brush-up on the basics if you know what I mean. Always try and kill as much excess momentum as you can and use your chest, lumbar, neck, abs, ankles, and whatever you think you need in order to get that perfect pose and balance.



also you didn't seem to post your replay. :3

I'll cnc that once you get around to posing it ;o