Skitz - We're not going to be putting your whole replay in the vid as it's too long for a vid so rather than focusing on completing the course go onto single player and really scrutinize and concentrate on just certain obstacles to get a impressive, fluid look.
On the other hand you could pick a much shorter course and do that. I will upload a parkour replay eventually and you will see what I mean as I probably won't finish it but the parts I do will be relaxed, realistic and there will be no grabs! You seem pretty decent at parkour so do as I say and you will see a big improvement. < This is all based off completed 2 and epic as I don't have the mod for COMPLETED and cba to get it. The Uke Bashing looks great especially the punch!

Something - Love the flow in your replay!

Everex - Great Kick, nice spin... could maybe do with some more realistic movement during the spin but that's really only a very minor flaw.