!Mo--[F] Boredom.rpl
The opener was fine, I won't talk generic because who the fuck cares.\ about whether your opener is boring or not, amirite? First kick was alright, cores are good. However I didn't like how both your hands were raised during the kick. I don't think it fit there. I wouldn't have minded the setup for the second kick if you had gt more dms, but you only got one so I gotta say that the setup was rather weird. After that it gets kinda messy, you didn't switch grabs and you also hit your head on uke's arm. Try to avoid that in the future :P. I like that you ungrab before the last kick. You take some time to pose and you look kinda twitchy in that phase. And after that you fall on the ground D:.
Since you're new to replay making I'll say that it wasn't bad but there's a few things to work on. I tried to mark them out for you. If you think I went too harsh, I am not actually being a dick to you for a random reason, all I am trying to do is help you improve :P.