Originally Posted by 63n713

Nice, I find watercolour hard to use myself, so I'm impressed

Originally Posted by ThePirateKing

you should test your colors on a separate sheet of paper, all of those marks on the sides
and top are a mess...
anyway, watercolor is a hard medium, good luck, but one tip, that might just be personal
preference, those hard dark outlines you did with ink that appear as they were done after
the watercoloring really take away from the charm of watercolor, and well.. the first one
just looks as though it was done with markers :v

another thing is, you should really work more on proportions and just general drawing
before you start to get into more complex things like watercolor.. the characters and
objects are really horribly proportionate
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these are two artists that I follow on DeviantArt that do watercolor, and they both
have interesting styles, maybe you can take something from them..
http://lora-zombie.deviantart.com/ga...ort=popularity
http://nick-ian.deviantart.com/galle...ort=popularity
notice how some of their pieces do have inked outlines, but they still keep the painted
feel of the piece?
i'd like to very much recommend Nick-Ian, as his stuff relates more to what you're doing