no need to post in this thread if its not an application, we sure do know that it is the weekend ;o

DiuwayBuns


Disconnect
I actually really like this replay. The opener was hella nice and fast, props on that.
The decap was pretty neat aswell,
although the second hit is pretty weirdly aimed considering the outcome of it.
The cork at the end was not needed and it really wasn't all that good, that's pretty much my biggest problem with the replay, which isn't such a big problem.

Homonculus
Eh, this was a bit of a let down from the last replay. The opener was pretty generic, and not all that good looking.
The split of ok, the hook was ok but again you pretty much just smashed it with your entire leg to get those dms (not like complaining about dm count in 5.0 even makes sense).
The smash was pretty neat at first glance but when I realized you only got one dm from it and the other one was you ripping it, it dropped on the impressive scale a bit.

Two Large Cities
The potential of that opener was pretty much wasted. The opener after that little backjump was pretty bad, not gonna lie.
Through most of the manipulation you looked like you didn't know what you were doing, but it dnt look super bad.
The first dm hit was neat, but I was expecting you to do something with the split body, but you really didn't. The legs just kinda jump around and serve no purpose.
The crotch boom was a grab dm but ok, I can let that slide, although it looked like you wanted to make it look like the kick from your lower body did that, which is not something I like personally, but that's all me.
The next boom was actually pretty alright, although you looked a bit stiff.

I was really excited when I saw your first replay. It was very nice, and had all your replays been up to that standard I would say yes. But then the other replays came and they were nowhere near the first one.
This does mean that you are able to do better replays , so Im fully expecting you to get in here soon, but for now, it is going to be a no


Alphan00b

Little Thoughts
Opener was pretty neat, all flowed well and it looked alright. The knee dm was alright, the following whatever wasn't. The momentum switch looked bad and so did the hit itself.
Making consecutive hits with the same limb twice look good is hard, so if you aren't completely confident in it looking good don't do it.
The transition to the next hit took you a while and looked pretty meh, did expect something better out of the hit but I guess that's just me being picky/

hiplotor
Opener was a bit twitchy but it had a pretty good idea, it was nice for a manip opener. The manipulation itself was not really up to standard tho. The first lif was alright, albeit a bit twitchy.
Then for some reason you hooked his legs for like a frame which did absolutely nothing. The next lift/spin was nice tho, liked it.
Then you try to kick him twice which, again, doesn't do anything and doesn't look pleasant. Grab to hit is a no-no in manips, double glute dm was ok.
Then, again, you just kinda kick ukes back, which looked like it was supposed to be a dm but you couldn't get it so you left it there.

Fragile
Opener was pretty neat, it looked nice, had good flow. Don't mind the grab, although the hit was meh, considering it was a shin hit, which can be transformed into neat hits.
The transition to the split was pretty nice too, as was the split. The decap looked a bit stiff tho. Not much else to say about this replay

I have definitely seen better replays from you. These replays are not ORMO worthy, but I sure as hell know you can make better ones. I am going to say no but Im pretty sure the next time around you apply you will have a good chance of joining.