ight so i enjoy hip hop in a way that nothing ever sounded bad to me, this doesn't sound bad to me either, but what i did notice is despite the bars and the flow, your voice doesn't have that power or character that makes it pop out, so it sounded like some dude put bars over some pre made beat they found, more so the beat was bumpin and all that so my first impression was on the beat to found out later that it was made by someone else, so harshly, those were the producer's songs with somebody's nice bars on it like you know what i'm sayin, so i guess really nothing is wrong with your bars or flow matter of fact they were hella fire, the thing is, you didn't quite deliver them in terms of your vocal performance, also, it's aight to pronounce things a bit differently, but i mean everyone would love to hear them bars spit clearly, snoop dog's line were clean even though he's always trippin.
yeah so that's all from me blood, keep doing what you're doing, all love those tracks were fire