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[WiP]Jetfire, a BASIC set by AlphasoniK


C&C is much appreciated.
I only did the head as for now, legs and triceps will follow shortly.

Last edited by AlphasoniK; Apr 14, 2010 at 07:52 PM.
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Epic stuff as always Alpha.

Love it.
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<AlphasoniK> Kristis: What the fuck is wrong with you, rainbow loving panda freak.
Seriously, try to piss standing up for a change. No life girly pants dimwit.

Those most whiteish lines look somehow odd to me. No idea why, maybe they're a bit TOO contrasted, but I'm not sure.

And the eyes, they are cool, but don't they have too-blurry feeling ingame?

Also, the head is 512, eh?


Well, I like the simplicity in sets right now, so I like the head. The colour theme is a little bit overused though (too. damn. many. demonsapphire.).

Overall, I like where this is going D:

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Demon/Radioactive. :D

Also yeah, it's 512 ;P
And all the pics are ingame except for the dual head in the bottom left.

I might change the platinum colored accents, I am not feeling them.

Once I finish the legs and triceps this is going into Auction.
Fr3styL . Improving by Improvising
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Hey man.
All I can say is
10/10.

EDIT : DUDE!!
Could you recolour? I got pure force and demon relax,could you recolour the radio to pure or demon to pure and radio to demon? Could I see both versions when you're done?
I really love this.
OH And radio into demo possible too?
Last edited by Praeter; Apr 13, 2010 at 10:51 PM.
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Demon to pure is not possible, Radio to demon is not possible.

Dark gray lights? Weird. Haha.

I can recolor the Demon to QS probably.
Cuz I need white for the lighting.
Fr3styL . Improving by Improvising
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Originally Posted by AlphasoniK View Post
I might change the platinum colored accents, I am not feeling them.

i AM feeling them though =/
if ur gna do a colour change, just dont do a colour please. go pure black or something
youre one of the few people confident enough to work with simplicity of design and colour. its what i like most about your work
keeping only the eyes a colour creates an epic focal point. i wouldnt even add colour to the body parts. k well maybe hands and torso...
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Planned on making layered legs with a few spikes,
all pretty basic and all really sharp. There is more shading than you think
on this head though, every layer has a shade, and two highlights.
Summing up to nearly 50 layers.
I am not planning on adding color to the rest ;P
Maybe a lifeline or something, really minor stuff.

Remember this is still a BASIC set, so only head, legs and triceps.
I might make more if it's popular enough and if I get a bid that's worth my while.
Fr3styL . Improving by Improvising
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Originally Posted by AlphasoniK View Post
Planned on making layered legs with a few spikes,
all pretty basic and all really sharp.

im seeing something that design wise, looks very pate5ish(older stuff maybe) but very you.

Originally Posted by AlphasoniK View Post
There is more shading than you think
on this head though, every layer has a shade, and two highlights.
Summing up to nearly 50 layers.

you make it look simple. best.
i usually merge alot of layers together, hate having to follow 50 layers...

honestly think thisis your best head yet.
personal preference probably has a fair amount to do with it.
but still
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This head is great. I really like the eyes, and the smoke-ish trails coming off of it.
I also really like the way that you can tell so easily which plate is overlapping with
which plate and which one's on top, and which one's on bottom. I'm trying to find
a mistake in this head so that this comment doesn't sound like I am obsessed with
you, but I can't seem to find anything. I can't tell if the eyes are mirrored because
there isn't really a clear shot of the full left side of the eye, but if it is, I would try
to change that. 9.5/10 because I hate rating things 10/10. For some reason I find
it... I can't think of the right word, but I guess it would be a toned down version of
pathetic? Idk.

THIS HEAD IS AWSUM.

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