Hmm, I like it, but there are some things that can be worked on. Personally I did not see enough effects, I saw the occasional slow-mo but some of them didn't seem to be in the right places. Also it could do with some music, if there was music, then my headset must be broken. Also as others said, it's best to hide the failures or sync them, it will give it a much "better" look you might say. If this is a beginners job, well done. You have lots of potential. Perhaps just add a few lighting effects and music, as I stated previously. Good work mate. Keep it up, 8/10.