HTOTM: FUSION
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Pat's decapping replays
Trying to improve
CnC needed

COMPLETELY SERIOUS:
CNC ME SO I CNC YOU
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D ~ fast one.rpl (71.1 KB, 62 views)
D ~ stupid one.rpl (40.9 KB, 30 views)
M ~ this is kinda cool.rpl (126.8 KB, 38 views)
Last edited by Patrickooo; Jan 6, 2013 at 06:57 PM.
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Well, things yoneed to improve:
Work on openers, make an opener that makes flow, I know it's hard but opener is important.
Your movement wAs a bit stiff, not too much but still a bit stiff.
I don't see your style in all replays, maybe add style to make it better.
Your hit was a bit weak, need more accurate and need to be more poowerful.
Last one, work on pose.
Actually, you r not that bad, you r ok.
Just need some improvement.
*requesting cnc :o
"People become stronger cause there are memories they won't forget."
wow k thx for CnC
New replay.
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New..
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D ~ on top.rpl (82.4 KB, 29 views)
D ~ weak.rpl (52.0 KB, 26 views)
Last edited by Patrickooo; Sep 21, 2012 at 04:30 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
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On top:
well, nive openee and a pretty good decap, but your arm ghosted somewhere and make that replay weird.
Pose was fail.
Weak:
opener was okay, the hit was confusing, movement was stiff and pose was kind bad.
C'mon, you r better than this bro
"People become stronger cause there are memories they won't forget."
Hmm, not that diffrent than your prevIous replay.
You better make a replay in 1-2 hour but the result is good.
Like me, when I'm still noob, I make 1 replay in 30 minutes.
But if you want to becoming better than this...
Try to make a boom, Use relax more, and don't grappy.
That what can you do right now.
After that, work on your movement and style.
"People become stronger cause there are memories they won't forget."
Ohh man.... I leaved mah replay thread for 1 month and a week, let's get back with this replay.........
Edit: lumbar dismember in replay
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Uhh, Guys, CnC?
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Pat ~ meh.rpl (141.2 KB, 21 views)
Last edited by Patrickooo; Oct 30, 2012 at 07:24 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
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Kay, I'm in school right now. I'll CnC it as soon as possible(as in I have to CnC it tommorow cause I can oly get on my laptop Thursday-Sunday.)

Desperately trying to get back into TB...

K so meh the begging was preety slow and weak, 4/10
the chest split was preety cool 8/10
the last kick was quite inaffective but it looked cool c: 7/10
over all 7.5/10

edit:CNC me too c:
I have a replay thread show it sum love http://forum.toribash.com/showthread...25#post5854525<3
Thx for comments
Apple: I will CnC yours now.
Blood: Alright.

Another replay.
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Pat ~ epic boom!.rpl (101.6 KB, 21 views)
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