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[VID] Trestet - Holdin on
Hello community,

There is my new video about Trestet :



Soft used :

Sony Vegas pro 11
Fraps

Music :

Flume - Holdin On (Hermitude Remix)

Comments are welcome
Last edited by Mocucha; Nov 29, 2015 at 11:26 PM.

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Too glitchy for my tastes, I know you're trying to work with the music but it just annoys me. I do wanna see the end product.
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the remap sync thing looked god awful and the overlay and cc shit that suddenly appeared after the parkour replay bothered me

some parts are either really choppy from slowmo or your frame rate drops suddenly for some reason
super cheesecakey jumpcuts to the same few frames. it's bad.
Originally Posted by Kaneki333 View Post
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Glitchy ? Choppy ? Cheesecakey ?

Wtf are you talking about ? Sorry but I don't get these words.

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the jump cuts were simply un enjoyable, not a better way to phrase it really. They did not serve any purpose in my opinion. They did not create a glitchy tech feel, and at the same time it killed the flow. Id remove all of them and keep the flow.
i didn't really liked the way it repeat/glitch in some parts.
the overlay seems ok for me.
the keyframing looks great.
and the text-tracking-tori on the beggining looked cool.
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Originally Posted by Mocucha View Post
Glitchy ? Choppy ? Cheesecakey ?

Wtf are you talking about ? Sorry but I don't get these words.

"wtf we meant" was the only thing you even made as far as effects go and aren't just ripped off some overlay website is bad.
it's cheesy, and looks god awful. if anything it's annoying.
Originally Posted by Kaneki333 View Post
I'm Brazilian, i'm alredy fucked every day i wake up

This is going to sound really mean, but I honestly think you should scrap this and start again from scratch.
This was really unenjoyable. The constant jumpcuts, which were poorly done was the leading factor. This along with the unnecessary glow and unfitting overlays.
You're capable of much more than this, mocucha. Please.

Please do not do the glitch repeat thing ever again.
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I really didn't like the part where it kept repeating the same thing over and over. The overlay was really nice this time though.

Me being edgy TRIGGER WARNING

Last edited by Glimpsed; Nov 24, 2015 at 07:53 AM.
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