Twist: First off fix your frames. ok so opener is ok until you switch rotation. when you spin like that it makes it alot easier if you swing your arms the same time you rotate your chest. what you did was do your arms first then you rotated your chest, which made it very hard to turn. the little kick off uke didnt really seem to do much. nice transition into the punch. the punch itself seemed pretty weak because of how fast you pulled back. the transition into the kick is pretty awkward, but you made it work. and nice little boom there.
ok so work on finishing your movements. try and follow through on movements you do. im not saying like changing direction is bad, but it has to be done right to look good. Also if all you do is hit change direction hit change direction, it gets old fast. try and add in some full spins like the one leading up to the punch. also work on learning what gets you spinning the best and how to create that momentum that will allow for the follow through.