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Ia this where I put this thing here?
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To be honest, this head is has some stuff that has to be improved.
The eyes - They're really seperated. You may want them to be looking in the same direction(unless you made it on purpose).
The mouth - if you wanted it to look like :3, then you should probably make it more round... like this
The glasses - you should change the reflections, so they're not mirrored.
The hair - imo, it should be "sharper" on the right side.
The lines - they have to be thiner, sharper on the ends. OR you may want to use just shapes.
I just said all the mistakes that I could find...
Other than that, it's a nice head. I like how you made the top of it. The idea is pretty good too.
art board mods: if they dont understand it its not cnc
Originally Posted by Arturix3 View Post
To be honest, this head is has some stuff that has to be improved.
The eyes - They're really seperated. You may want them to be looking in the same direction(unless you made it on purpose).
The mouth - if you wanted it to look like :3, then you should probably make it more round... like this
The glasses - you should change the reflections, so they're not mirrored.
The hair - imo, it should be "sharper" on the right side.
The lines - they have to be thiner, sharper on the ends. OR you may want to use just shapes.
I just said all the mistakes that I could find...
Other than that, it's a nice head. I like how you made the top of it. The idea is pretty good too.

Forget what he said, its frikken epic.
I am evil.
Originally Posted by drone36 View Post
Forget what he said, its frikken epic.

well... If all this would be fixed, it would more epic. I just wanted rickyz to know what to improve next time, etc.
Also, sorry, if the large amounts of my criticism somehow offended you... I just tend to point out all the bad stuff... good things are just too obvious xD
damn, I can't stop... The eyes... The reflections on them are mirrored too :<

Anyways, it's still a very good head and most of stuff I mentioned can't be really seen at first glance...
art board mods: if they dont understand it its not cnc
hm not bad rick. Good work on the eyes and goggles
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Well...I guess if you call that art.. o_o
Well good go at it rawwrh, 10 points for trying.
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