Hey i made a new replay, and i got super frustrated with it. No big booms or the likes, so ima prolly revisit it later on.
Really appreciate the feedback mused my dude.
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ok I can see you're not bad so I'm gonna try to be mean with this thing like some kind of toribash simon cowell or whatever
Right so looking it over you hit lots of things with your shins and knees, now knee hits n stuff is fine and all but not when you don't look like you mean to do them because most of the kicks were really kinda sloppy in the execution. I mean the setup was nice but you messed up the positioning a bit I think which meant that you couldn't really hit anything with your foot proper, so it made it look a lot less skillful than it really was.
shins thing aside the opener was pretty ok nothing to say, split to the chest boom was pretty to look at and you broke a lot of things so thats pretty good in my book. All the shit flowed nicely and though there wasn't much for you to do when getting over to the lower half of uke's body you at least put something in there so it didn't look dead. Again breaking the things nice blah blah blah then like, the part you did with his midsection was pretty cool, hitting it on himself like that. But there was a bit of a missed opportunity with the skeet-esque thing you did there at the end, could've hit something cooler and more further away with it, like the arm way back over there far away like. If you wanted to be really cool you could even hit that part of his hip flying away. But skeets are a PITA so I don't blame you for not doing something more.
All in all the flow was real good and stuff, liked the booms and hits but those shins man, work on that, get things further away, that sort of stuff, ending a bit lackluster. Nothing bad or anything, just the perceived sloppiness of it detracted from the movements.
Number scores are meaningless/10
Right so looking it over you hit lots of things with your shins and knees, now knee hits n stuff is fine and all but not when you don't look like you mean to do them because most of the kicks were really kinda sloppy in the execution. I mean the setup was nice but you messed up the positioning a bit I think which meant that you couldn't really hit anything with your foot proper, so it made it look a lot less skillful than it really was.
shins thing aside the opener was pretty ok nothing to say, split to the chest boom was pretty to look at and you broke a lot of things so thats pretty good in my book. All the shit flowed nicely and though there wasn't much for you to do when getting over to the lower half of uke's body you at least put something in there so it didn't look dead. Again breaking the things nice blah blah blah then like, the part you did with his midsection was pretty cool, hitting it on himself like that. But there was a bit of a missed opportunity with the skeet-esque thing you did there at the end, could've hit something cooler and more further away with it, like the arm way back over there far away like. If you wanted to be really cool you could even hit that part of his hip flying away. But skeets are a PITA so I don't blame you for not doing something more.
All in all the flow was real good and stuff, liked the booms and hits but those shins man, work on that, get things further away, that sort of stuff, ending a bit lackluster. Nothing bad or anything, just the perceived sloppiness of it detracted from the movements.
Number scores are meaningless/10
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