Here we go, this is the first ever time I'm going to ask too see what people think I should fix BEFORE I finalize the actual picture.
(Uploaded picture to imgur because swag, and it's not done so no deviant art yet :o)
Here are things that I won't change at all
1. The hair is finalized, I won't touch it/change it unless something is drastically off
2. The eyes won't be changed at all either, again unless something drastically off
PLEASE REALIZE THAT I'M HAVENT HARDENED THE LINES YET, I DO THAT BEFORE SHADING
now please, what do you think I should fix before finalizing the picture? :o