A great album, great flow and delivery, each track was riddled with word play and metaphors that kept me hooked until the very end. They correlated perfectly, creating a story displayed for all the listener to visualize within their conscience along with the smooth delivery and mind boggling lyricism. The message was great and yet again, the execution was greater, each stanza and verse in this poetry you call "rap" was just beautiful, verbal boomhits and your relentless flow made this so enjoyable, each word was manipulated in a manner that I've never seen before, let alone believed could happen. I love you for producing such a work of art, I'll never forget his album, it metaphorically groped my soul. Thank you.
Last edited by Hypez; Sep 9, 2015 at 01:14 AM.
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opener was pretty generic I guess, not that its a bad thing. I didn't like how you didn't use your right leg to help with the kick off, would have made things flow nicer. Transition after that was kinda random stuff, with a lot of unnecessary ghosting. Try to keep those to a minimum.
Your manip did indeed get him moving, but I felt a lot of the manip hits were really messy and could be aimed better. Cleaner hits tend to transfer more energy allowing for a much smoother manip.
dm's were alright, timed pretty good I'd say.
That final transition after that corkscrew thing was stiff as a tree, but its not as important as the actual substance of the replay.
You got a good thing going, but you are a little rough around the edges so to speak. Not bad by all means though, gj.
opener was pretty generic I guess, not that its a bad thing. I didn't like how you didn't use your right leg to help with the kick off, would have made things flow nicer. Transition after that was kinda random stuff, with a lot of unnecessary ghosting. Try to keep those to a minimum.
Your manip did indeed get him moving, but I felt a lot of the manip hits were really messy and could be aimed better. Cleaner hits tend to transfer more energy allowing for a much smoother manip.
dm's were alright, timed pretty good I'd say.
That final transition after that corkscrew thing was stiff as a tree, but its not as important as the actual substance of the replay.
You got a good thing going, but you are a little rough around the edges so to speak. Not bad by all means though, gj.
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i'm not too fond of the relaxyish movements at certain points tbh
hold that damn neck will you (nah it's fine)
opener was pretty random
manip looked a little messy
last jump before hit was eh
dms were nice
gr8
i'm not too fond of the relaxyish movements at certain points tbh
hold that damn neck will you (nah it's fine)
opener was pretty random
manip looked a little messy
last jump before hit was eh
dms were nice
gr8
I don't really like the opener to be honest. you kinda extended and contracted your knees a bit too much.
The manip was very good. You make me jealous I can't get uke to flow like that ;_;
I don't like the way you stopped the flow at around frame 300
other than that, that was pretty good. good job!
The manip was very good. You make me jealous I can't get uke to flow like that ;_;
I don't like the way you stopped the flow at around frame 300
other than that, that was pretty good. good job!
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