That was one of my favorite lifts I've ever seen for a manip. wp.
But your dms were lack luster to say the least, the change in momentum for the glute kick really wasnt fire like the lift tbh, overall pretty solid tho, just work on your dms
Knock down da walls wiv big rocks and kill all the men wiv arras. - Lamby
toe launching, ghosting, swingthrus from your toes. It's pretty much everything a good tricking replay shouldn't be. I know it's your first but considering your background in madman replays and your pretty good understanding of how the tori works I'd say you could do way better.