Hey Clay so far I like it, but my only problem is that it's too long. Why don't you try to make RedMercy's types of Road to Master. Play 3 games, show the highlights of them and put some music but make the volume low so it doesn't overshadow your voice. A humans attention span is low so not that many people will watch your video in it's entirety since it's 53 minutes long.
Overall I like the video, the quality of the video is great and your microphone sounds crispy clean. I'd just like it to be a bit shorter.