Being who I am, this kind of a melody can only serve me for an intro to a hurtfully terrible death metal song, so I'm afraid I can't really give good criticism for this. Duh.
I don't like the breaks with silence. And as I mentioned, the song kind of doesn't have any SPECIAL point, it feels like it's still intro all the time. I'd feel better to hear some sort of flashy bullshit in the middle or later in the song. But maybe you aimed for that, I don't know shit about "post-rock riffs"*.
*and can't do research about them because atm I'm busy studying, drinking tea, complaining about shitty pens, having feels and listening to cryptopsy.
Last edited by JtanK; Feb 3, 2013 at 09:04 PM.