The dancing was stiff and slightly casual. Pretty good, but not good enough.
Hellish Embark, you ruined the whole replay by grabbing the chest joint after the DMs. Nograb replays are supposed to be all nograb, not just the hits. It's like when you make it to the end of a level in a game. You don't just kill yourself in the end without any reason. It was good though. The best replay of those three by miles.
Carbon Coated, you could've done so much more with it, seriously. I looked casual when you completely ingored the rest of the upperbody. You could have dismembered more of it.
For now it's a no. But you're getting better and you should keep it up. Maybe next time