yeah, it looked really nice.
the manip was solid, and it was pretty stellar how you moved the way you did, while also juggling uke on top of you.
But, the ending was really bad. Everything up to the last kick was nice. Maybe try to continue maniping ukes head before decapping? The decapped looked rather bad imo. I mean, all it looked like was a decap. If it was my choice, and you didn't want to edit it, leave the decap out. It just makes the end of it looked half assed.
*stick foot out*
*taps neck*
*yay decap*
there was nothing else to it than that. It looks like you went for it, just to get it. And nothing good came out of it. Fix that and it will be flawless by me, others might think differently