Ill give you a bit of CnC. I chose POW! and Pumped up Kicks by random.
Pumped up Kicks: Nice, kinda stiff here and there are you tend to hold joints for a bit too long, I also don't like the fact that you moved uke in both of the replays, to me it shows a lack of skill, that you weren't able to get the hits without moving uke.
Pow: Opener was kinda generic, as was the decap, after the split (which was okay) you instantly held all, which looked bad. and then there was a random grab for no reason.
You have lots of potential, you just need to work on getting the hits and fluidity.