You should smudge out the gray areas so it can look like actual metal plating.
Also the eyes could be better.
Other than that your shading is okay

Its not even done yet..

Well, that's why he's telling you these things.
Only because it's not finished you can still make it better than it would turn out otherwise, etc.

i know, i mean. i only posted it cause i had nothing better to post or do

Why would you post it here, and not expect someone to critique it?

Yo.
Another track

Pretty sure it gets boring after a while, but oh well...

followed, keep it up artur! \o/

nice track, but sometimes it's too repetitive.

Creation of Arthur, Hush and myself.
http://gyazo.com/0c26d6993d10b09488e5c74c012297ca.png



Pr0.

EDIT: Arthur left, oh well.

http://prntscr.com/2t63cr

this is lolio, for you wondering

I made that and wrote "10/10" in awful mouse-paint, and Maylene turned the first 3 characters into "LOL" halfway through, so he was named lolio

and yes, he is in my avatar
gg