HTOTM: FUSION
I think pause already praised anything that could ever be to praise in the replay, so I guess I'm gonna do the asshole part and point out the flaws.

The jump to decap looked akward. You broke the flow, but I'm not talking about when you stopped and changed direction, I'm saying that when you jumped you just somehow looked like you shifted directions very quickly, and then continued the spin in midair like normal.
Also stiff arms in the beggining, but it's not that important.


Made this yesterday with an old opener.
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pusga - Ruffles.rpl (238.3 KB, 25 views)
Old schooling as usual, eh?

Opener was a bit awkar- you know what, lemme just make this simple.

The movements were awkward as hell, but you boomed the living shit out of uke. All I can say is, try to figure out some alternatives for the pose. Cooler pose pl0x.

Anyway, I'd love some CnC on this shitty piece of shit.
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[TK]- M- Water Combustion.rpl (202.5 KB, 33 views)
beware
the goblin
Oh wow, nice job here tamakuu!

The overall movements were smooth and good.

Kick was a tad bit messy, but it was destructive and looked great.

Pose was great as well. Good job Tamakuu glad to see you coming back to us.
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Radiance.rpl (174.7 KB, 23 views)
\o\ | ORMO | OSHI | OLDA | [duck] | Team Canada | Maple Syrup United | Team Philippines | [UssR] | Anime United | /o/
Starter was messy, your bent knee contracted twice and your arm was floppy. You raised the shoulders at the wrong time too, making things look worse.

Powerful kicks, think you could've gotten a bigger boom with the second one.

Pose looked a bit lazy, maybe you could have done something with the falling head?

The hand thingy looked odd. Mainly due to you smacking the thigh and groin against yourself for it to dm. There were two dm sounds there making it weirder.

I'm rude, sorry about that.
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Jisse - Firstborn.rpl (1.12 MB, 18 views)
jisse_battleground_heaven.tbm (9.7 KB, 12 views)
Originally Posted by jisse View Post
Starter was messy, your bent knee contracted twice and your arm was floppy. You raised the shoulders at the wrong time too, making things look worse.

Powerful kicks, think you could've gotten a bigger boom with the second one.

Pose looked a bit lazy, maybe you could have done something with the falling head?

The hand thingy looked odd. Mainly due to you smacking the thigh and groin against yourself for it to dm. There were two dm sounds there making it weirder.

I'm rude, sorry about that.

Nice self spar Jisse i love the way you flowed through the replay.

Here's two replays I don't get
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Last edited by Taco901; Nov 8, 2012 at 09:16 AM.
oh shit waddup

Bad grammar, beware!



Soccer.
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Jisse - Fortitudo.rpl (529.3 KB, 21 views)
Nice replay jisse but I think the header was too abrupt.

My first time posting here.

WIP
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waaaaaaa.rpl (142.4 KB, 17 views)
Last edited by cube; Nov 13, 2012 at 06:03 AM.
<Fish> How is being a dumbass a form of venting? Is this some sort of flatulence related joke?
The opener was stiff...
The transition was really nice, fluid and realistic.
The spin itself looked pretty well, but when you kicked backwards, you lost alot of momentum.
Transition after that was really nice. Fluid as the last one.
Loved the second spin. The two kicks looked awesome. Really.
But the pose disappointed me. It was fluid and it didn't hold for a couple of more frames.

Good job anyways. Enjoyable replay wip.
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