#Digest: I see something good but still not enough. Apply again with new replays, next time could go better.
The opener of the first replay was pretty sweet and also the first hit.
Imo you should have done the decap later, maybe in a boomhit,
The decap was nothing special and even if you grabbed for the last hit you've made only 1 dm.
Try to release the hand in the last frame of the last hit, i guess you'd make more dm.
The second replay makes me remember a Larfen's one.
Anyway, the manipulationwas decent even if i dislike when someone uses grab in a manipulation.
Also the hit was nice but it looked a bit weak, the first time i saw this i thought you've made only 1dm.
Imo you could have done something more after the split, maybe a decap.
Overall this is the replay i enjoyed more.
The last replay was too messy. The manipulation is very grabby and ,as i already said, the hits are really messy.
I noticed the triple skeet in one throw but it was nothing special.